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17.今天是父亲节.假定你是李,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子.要点如下:
●表述你与父亲间的情感.
●为父亲制作二张卡片.
●帮助父亲做点事.
●陪父亲散步等.
注意:1.词数100词左右.
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3..邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear John,
It's Father's Day today.It's a special day,isn't it?
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
Today I will make two beautiful cards for him,with my thanks and best wishes on them.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)I'm sure he'll be very happy.
What'your plan for Father's Day?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息今天是父亲节.假定你是李,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:●表述你与父亲间的情感.●为父亲制作二张卡片.●帮助父亲做点事.●陪父亲散步等.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:meet with遇到;Besides另外;play chess 下棋;look forward to盼望;hear from收到…的信息;
Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)
Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear John,
       It's Father's Day today.It's a special day,isn't it?
       I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
       Today I will make two beautiful cards for him,with my thanks and best wishes on them.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)I'm sure he'll be very happy.
      What's your plan for Father's Day?I'm looking forward to hearing from yon.
                                                                             Yours,
                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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