题目内容
9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I have the best friend who I can share everything with．His name was Li Gang，and we're in the same grades．Li Gang is a good student because he is very hardworking．He is good in all subjects，especially math．I've learned a lot of from him．Besides that，he's honesty．I trust him complete and we share secrets all the time．He always remember my birthday and he is fun be with．He tells funny jokes but always makes me laugh．Finally，he is a very good listener．I hope we'll stay friends forever．
分析 本文主要介绍作者的朋友李刚．他和作者在同一个年级，学习刻苦，各门功课都很好，特别擅长数学，作者向他学习了很多．人也很诚实，作者希望永远和作在一起．
解答 I have the best friend who I can share everything with．His name was Li Gang，and we're in the same grades．Li Gang is a good student because he is very hardworking．He is good in all subjects，especially math．I've learned a lot of from him．Besides that，he's honesty．I trust him complete and we share secrets all the time．He always remember my birthday and he is fun∧be with．He tells funny jokes but always makes me laugh．Finally，he is a very good listener．I hope we'll stay friends forever．
详解：
1．the改为a 考查冠词． friend是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
2．was改为is 考查动词时态．本文讲述的是一般事实，要用一般现在时态．
3．grades改为grade 考查名词．grade此处表示单数概念，即"同一个年级"，用单数形式．
4．in改为at 考查固定搭配．be good at意为"擅长于"，是固定搭配．
5．去掉of 考查词语用法．a lot是副词，a lot of后接名词，此处应是前者．
6．honesty改为honest 考查形容词．be动词后接形容词用表语．
7．complete改为completely 考查副词．trust是动词，要用副词修饰．
8．remember改为remembers 考查主谓一致．主语he是单数形式，谓语动词也应用单数形式．
9．加to 考查动词不定式．此处是sb/sth．+is+adj．+to do结构．
10．but改为and 考查连词．前后两个分句之间是并列关系，而非转折关系，用连词and．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
