题目内容
20．某动物关爱协会面向学校招募"动物代言人"，希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物，并为之代言．假如你是石家庄市新华中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动．请你用英语给活动负责人写一封申请邮件，内容如下：1．表示有意参加；2．说明自己关爱动物；3．打算为哪种动物代言；4．希望申请成功．注意：1．词数在100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已经写好．4．参考词汇：代言人spokesmanDear sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle school in Shijiazhuang．_______________
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分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求按照提示信息完成所给表格的申请陈述部分．根据提示可知本部分需要三部分内容，即表明自己的想法；陈述自己申请代言的理由；表达自己的希望．在写作时需要用现在时说明自己的想法，用将来时表明自己的计划．此外还要注意用高级句式和高级词汇，提高文章的档次．
【亮点说明】本文要点全面，结构紧凑，语言通顺流畅．在文章中作者使用了一些过渡或者总结的词汇，比如meanwhile，therefore，in short等，使文章衔接紧凑．此外还用了in spite of，be capable of，go extinct，boost the harvest 等高级词汇短语，显示了作者丰富的词汇量．
In this day and age，there is a growing awareness that animals are our friends and we ought to conserve them．（高分句型一）
In spite of the fact that sometimes they may kill people，nevertheless，they are capable of catching mice in the fields so as to boost the harvests．（高分句型二）
I harbor the idea that I'll preserve in protecting animals forever．（高分句型三）
解答 Dear Sir，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Xinhua Middle school in Shijiazhuang．In this day and age，there is a growing awareness that animals are our friends and we ought to conserve them．（高分句型一）Therefore，I won't miss this chance to participate in it．
I'm considerate，friendy and patient．Meanwhile，I adore animals and will aid them when they're needed．I'd like to speak for snakes．In spite of the fact that sometimes they may kill people，nevertheless，they are capable of catching mice in the fields so as to boost the harvests．（高分句型二）Nowadays，a vast numbler of snakes are hunt in order to assemble their fur or eat them．Several kinds of them are going extinct!
In short，I desire to apply successfully．I harbor the idea that I'll preserve in protecting animals forever．（高分句型三）
Yours，
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
