题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, some of my classmates and I took a bicycle trip along the "Huan Shan Green Road", that was specially built for people to relax ourselves. The scenery along the road was fascinating, with trees, flowers, hills and lakes on both side. We stopped by a lake for a rest, where a great many of people are playing happily. But something unpleasant caught our eyes. There was rubbish here or there, and there were many plastic bags and bottles floated on the surface of the lake. Such beautiful place was so serious polluted. What a shame! In the end, we couldn't help collecting the rubbish after we left.
【答案】
【1】that→which
【2】ourselves→themselves
【3】side→sides
【4】many后面的of去掉
【5】are→were
【6】here后面的or→and
【7】floated→floating
【8】Such后面加a
【9】serious→seriously
【10】after→before/ when
【解析】
试题分析:作者在the "Huan Shan Green Road"上骑自行车玩,看到到处都是垃圾,作者和他的同学忍不住在离开前收集垃圾。
【1】that→which 此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词指物,that不能用于非限制性定语从句,故把that改为which。
【2】ourselves→themselves 句意:人们放松自己。即“他们自己”,故把ourselves改为themselves。
【3】side→sides 表示“路两边”,前面有both,故side要用复数形式。
【4】many后面的of去掉 固定词组:a great many+名词复数,of多余,故去掉。
【5】are→were 句意:许多人正在高兴地在湖边玩。动作发生在过去,故用过去时态,故把are改为were。
【6】here后面的or→and 固定搭配:here and there到处。故把or改为and。
【7】floated→floating 句意:有很多漂浮在湖面上的塑料袋和瓶子。与逻辑主语bags and bottles是主动关系,故把floated改为floating。
【8】Such后面加a 表示“这样一个美丽的地方”,place是单数名词,故要在Such后面加a。
【9】serious→seriously 副词修饰过去分词,故把serious改为seriously。
【10】after→before/ when 句意:当我们离开(或我们离开以前),我们忍不住收集垃圾。根据句意,故把after改为before/ when。
【知识拓展】
1.so + 形容词/副词 + that + 从句,如:
This story is so interesting that I want to read it again.(这个故事如此有趣以至我想再读一次.)
2.so+形容词/副词+(a/an)+(单数)复数可数名词/+that+从句,如果句中的名词是单数可数名词,其前就要用a或an,如果是复数可数名词或者,前面就不用,如:
Those are so beautiful flowers that wants to pick them.(那些花是如此漂亮以至那个女孩想要摘下它们。)
3.such+a/an+形容词+单数可数名词+that+从句,如:It is such an interesting story that I want to read it again.(这是一个如此有趣的故事以至我想再读一次。)
温馨提示:so+表示数量的词many/much/few/little(少)+名词,此时不能用such。