题目内容
20.过生日互赠礼物在中学生中似乎成为一种时尚,甚至有的学生还去饭店搞生日聚会.对此,同学们有不同的看法.假设你是王平,请你根据下表提示,给某英语报社的编辑写一封信,并谈谈自己的观点.赞成 | 为同学们提供交际机会;利于增进同学之间的友谊;学习之余可以放松心情. |
反对 | 容易造成对时间和金钱的浪费;导致攀比;对青少年学习和成长造成不利影响. |
你的观点 | … |
2.短文须包括表中的全部内容,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.参考词汇:攀比 keep up with the Joneses.
分析 本文是一个表格式的作文,根据表格提供的内容文章可写成三段式.第一段描述存在的现状,第二段阐述赞成和反对的观点,第三段阐明个人观点..要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子,然后根据文章的中心话题和要求,把这些要点连句成文.
高分句型一:Sometimes,we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels,which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.这是一个非限制性定语从句,which指代前边整个句子的意思.
高分句型二:Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship.本句中it是形式主语,真正的主语是动词不定式to communicate with each other and develop our friendship.
解答 Dear Aeditor,
I'm a middle school student named Wang Ping.Recently,we often have to buy presents for our classmates'birthdays. Sometimes,we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels,which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.(亮点句型一)【描述现象】
About this there are two different views.Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship,(亮点句型二)and beides,we can relax after hard work at school.However,some other students think it's a waste of money and time and can lead us to getting into the bad habit of trying to keep up with the Joneses,which has a bad effect on our growth and studies.【赞成和反对】
As far as I'm concerned,it's not easy for our parents to make money and keep us at school for education.So there is no need for us to do like that.We must treasure our parents'labor and put our hearts into our studies.【个人观点】
What do you think about it?I'm expecting your reply.
Yours,
Wang Ping
点评 该书面表达为图表类,通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据.考生应细致观察图表内容,用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚.另外,平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇,以使得行文有更多的亮点.
40%的同学认为 | 60%的同学认为 | 你的观点 |
1.有点荒诞,有时让人无法理解; 2.违背了汉语的语法规则,对学习毫无帮助. | 1.幽默,使语言更生动; 2.有助于表达思想. | 1.… 2.… |
2.词数120左右.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.参考词汇:荒诞的 ridiculous
With the development of the Internet,there has come a kind of language called Web Language.Recently,our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.