题目内容
【题目】假设你是高三学生李华,将于今年六月份毕业。请你给你的英语老师Miss Wang写一封感谢信。要点如下:写信目的;老师对你的帮助;表达祝愿。
注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Wang,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Wang,
As our graduation is drawing near, I'm afraid that we have to say goodbye to each other soon. Here I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your support and guidance during the past three years.
I still remember there was a time when I was struggling with my English learning and even thought of giving it up. However, it was you who selflessly sacrificed your spare time to guide me, cheer me up and help me with my English. Without your help, I couldn't have made such great progress.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you and I wish you good health and a happy mood every day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给英语老师Miss Wang写一封感谢信。
第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 写信目的;
2. 老师对你的帮助;
3. 表达祝愿
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
offer to do sth./ do sb. a favor/ make progress/ have difficulty in/ thanks for/ show sb sth/ devote…to…/ lead to
第三步:连词成句
1. With our graduation drawing near, I'm afraid that we have to say goodbye to each other soon.
2. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your support and guidance during the past three years.
3. I still remember there was a time when I had difficulty in my English learning, and even planned to give up.
4. It was you that selflessly devoted your spare time to guiding me, cheering me up and helping me with my English.
5. But for your help, I couldn't have made such great progress.
6. I would like to express my warm thanks to you and I wish you good health and a happy mood every day.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)