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15.运动会、文艺节、春游、志愿者服务…丰富多彩的校园活动使我们在紧张的学习之余尽情释放潜能,展示特长,实现自我发展.请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,具体描述你参与过的一次校园活动,并简要谈谈你对该活动的看法或它对你的影响.Last semester there was an English Speaking Contest,which of course,would be a perfect chancefor meto stand out.Ipicked up my courage and decided to give it a try.During the following days,Ispent every minute available polishing the speech script and rehearsing ittime and again.
The day finally came and I was on the stage,smile on face.Naturally,I felt a bit nervous and my speech was not fluent at first.But once that awkwardness was over,Iquickly regained my calmness and my speechflowed on.How proud and excited I was whenthe sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium.
Through the very experience,Irealized that chances favor those who are well prepared.Consequently,Iwill better equip myself for the coming challenges in my life..
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
During the following days,I spent every minute available polishing the speech script and rehearsing it time and again.
在接下来的几天里,我花了每一分钟一次又一次的抛光和彩排演讲稿.
高分句型二:
How proud and excited I was when the sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium.
我是多么骄傲和兴奋当喝彩声中响起在礼堂里的每一个角落.
解答 Last semester there was an English Speaking Contest,which of course,would be a perfect chance for me to stand out.I picked up my courage and decided to give it a try.During the following days,I spent every minute available polishing the speech script and rehearsing it time and again(高分句型一).
The day finally came and I was on the stage,smile on face.Naturally,I felt a bit nervous and my speech was not fluent at first.But once that awkwardness was over,I quickly regained my calmness and my speech flowed on.How proud and excited I was when the sound of applause rose in every corner of the auditorium(高分句型二).
Through the very experience,I realized that chances favor those who are well prepared.Consequently,I will better equip myself for the coming challenges in my life.
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
例如: It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you.Luckily The I was/are completely free then,so I'll to say"yes".I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8p.m.in/on Friday evening |
But none of that will make us happier.And the sad thing is that it can take us decades of pursuing (追求) wealth and expensive things before we realize that.So what will bring us happiness?Luckily,there are three things that don't cost anything.Here they are:
Good relationships.We have a human need to be close with other human beings.Having good,supportive friendships,a strong marriage or loving relationships with our family members will make us much more likely to be happy.Therefore,take time,today,to stay with your loved ones,to tell them what they mean to you,to listen to them,and to develop your relationships with them.
Positive thinking.Optimism(乐观) is one of the best indicators of people who lead a happy life.Happy people feel empowered,in control of their lives.So why not make positive thinking a habit?In fact,this should be one of the first habits you develop.
Flow.This is a popular concept on the Internet these days 一 the state we enter when we are completely focused on the work or task.Having work and leisure(休闲)that gets you in this state of flow will almost undoubtedly lead to happiness.People find the greatest enjoyment not when they're passively mindless,but when they're absorbed in a mindful challenge.
If you are interested in some kind of work and keen on some kind of hobbies,it is not a bad idea.Turn off the TV 一 this is the opposite of flow 一 and then go outside and do something that truly makes you active.
Title | Three Secrets to(61)Happiness | |
Some people's (62) thought/attitude/opinion/view/idea. | If we were(63)richer/wealthier,we would have a happier life. | |
Fact | It will be a long time before we(64)realize money cannot make us happier. | |
Advice | Set up good relationships | ●We are much more(65)likelyto be happy if we have good relationships. ●Tell your loved ones they mean a lot to you and listen to them,(66) developingyour relationships with them. |
Think(67) positively. | ●People who lead a happy life are believed to be optimistic. ●People need to(68) form/developthe habit of making positive thinking. | |
Flow | ●When we are (69)devoted/committed_ to our work or task,we find the greatest happiness. ●Find work that (70)interestsyou and hobbies you are keen on. |
Can humans use animals as earthquake detectors(探测器)?Debate over whether or not animals can truly sense earthquakes has not solved the question.Support for the idea that animals can sense earthquakes includes studies which suggest that animals may be able to feel the Earth vibrate(振动) before humans.Other ideas suggest that animals may sense electrical changes in the air or gas released from the Earth which could be indicators(预示) of an earthquake.
However,other researchers think the animals'ability is very doubtful.Some scientists feel that there is no strong scientific evidence to support the idea that animals can sense earthquakes.They say that it is difficult to develop a controlled study which can connect a specific animal behavior with an earthquake occurrence.They suggest that human psychology may have an effect on pet owners,as they may want to attribute(归于) powers of sensing earthquakes to their animals.Others have also pointed out that animals react to so many things-being hungry,defending their land,mating,enemies…And if an earthquake can shake millions of people,it is likely that a few of their pets will,by chance,be acting strangely before an earthquake.
Whether or not animals can sense earthquakes before humans do remains to be seen.
Phenomenon | Animals(71)behave/actstrangely before earthquakes. | |
Examples | Catfish move violentl y,chickens stop laying eggs and bees(72)leavetheir hive. Cats and dogs feel(73)nervous and restless. | |
Different (74)opinions/views/ideasabout the mystery | Some researchers support it. | Some researchers (75)doubtit. |
Arguments | Animals can feel the Earth's vibration(76)ahead of humans. Animals can sense electrical changes in the air or gas. | It's difficult to conduct a study on the (77)connectionbetween animals'behavior and earthquakes. Pet owners may be (78)affected by their psychology. Many things can(79)result in animals'strange behavior. |
(80)Conclusion | Whether or not animals can sense earthquakes is unknown. |