题目内容
7.Directions:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你帮助别人的经历,以及你事后的感想.
注意:
1.字数不少于120;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
I saw a lot of people standing in front of the supermarket when I was walking down the street.
我看见很多人站在超市前面当我走在街上时.
高分句型二:
If they are in trouble,we will try to help them out of trouble.
如果他们有困难,我们会尽力帮助他们摆脱困境.
解答 Last Sunday,I went to Haimen to go shopping.I saw a lot of people standing in front of the supermarket when I was walking down the street(高分句型一).
I wondered what was happening there.I hurried to go there to take a look.I ran quickly.To my surprise,there was a girl sitting in the street.The girl with a school bag was about 17 years old.There was also a piece of paper in front of her.It said,"…my family don't have enough money for me to go to school…"
I was very sad to see that.I couldn't help giving some money to the girl.The girl was very grateful to me.She said,"Thank you!"I was glad to do it.Then I went away with a smile.
That day I had a dream in the evening; I dreamt that I had a lot of money.I did a lot of wonderful things.I helped the poor and the old.
After the dream,I know that we should be kind to others.If they are in trouble,we will try to help them out of trouble(高分句型二).Then we will feel very happy and we will think everything is beautiful.Then we will have a nice life.Dear friends,try to be a kind person,the world will be nicer and nicer.
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.

目前存在的问题 | 1.学习不努力,考试不能得高分,家长生气; |
2.长时间看电视,长时间上网聊天、玩游戏,…; | |
3.拒绝做父母亲叫做的事情,不愿和父母呆在一起,…; | |
… | |
对解决上述问题的建议 | (请根据自己的经历与感想,提出两至三点建议) |
2.词数120左右(开头已经写好,不计入总词数).
At present,the generation gap between us senior students and our parents has become a social problem,which makes both us and parents upset.
One was not to pull her out of the water(42)B she asked.The other was to give her a red sports (43)Dif she made it.
In gay spirits Trudy(44)C out,swimming strongly.All the swimmers started at 7:09in the morning.Her father and the trainer were going along in a boat beside her.
At ten o'clock,rain began falling.(45)A,Trud trod (踩) water while drinking and eating a chicken leg.Then she started swimming (46)C.The wind was(47)B and the sea became rougher(粗暴的).
Late(48)B the wind became even worse.The trainer decided it was (49)Ctrying to finish.He called to Trudy to (50)C.
"No human being could do it in this weather."He said"It's (51)Bto go on."
However,her father shouted,"Don't grab her.Let her (52)D."
At seven o'clock the tides(潮水) turned(53)Dher.It was more difficult to move ahead.But Trudy still swam on.She (54)Avictory was possible now,for the English coast was in (55)C.
It was getting dark.A sound could be(56)Aover the wind; hundreds of car horns(喇叭) were cheering her on.With (57)Dstrength,she finished the last 200yards.
At 9:35p.m.Trudy got out of water.She had swum some 35miles in (58)Cthe 21-mile-wide Channel (59)Aa strong storm.But she had made it in 14hours and 30minutes.
"Well,Pop."She said to her father,"I(60)DI get my car this time,don't I?"
41.A.given | B.refused | C.allowed | D.promised |
42.A.as | B.unless | C.even if | D.when |
43.A.suit | B.shoe | C.hat | D.car |
44.A.rushed | B.left | C.started | D.worked |
45.A.At midday | B.In the morning | C.In the evening | D.In the late afternoon |
46.A.faster | B.better | C.again | D.across |
47.A.stopping | B.rising | C.changing | D.increasing |
48.A.morning | B.afternoon | C.evening | D.night |
49.A.necessary | B.important | C.useless | D.good |
50.A.keep up | B.slow down | C.give up | D.take a rest |
51.A.difficult | B.stupid | C.impossible | D.unnecessary |
52.A.go | B.decide | C.come out | D.go on |
53.A.towards | B.with | C.at | D.against |
54.A.realized | B.noticed | C.found out | D.thought |
55.A.the distance | B.reach | C.sight | D.hand |
56.A.heard | B.saw | C.felt | D.noticed |
57.A.fresh | B.greater | C.weakening | D.remaining |
58.A.flying | B.swimming | C.crossing | D.passing |
59.A.in spite of | B.because of | C.against | D.during |
60.A.demand | B.am afraid | C.hope | D.guess. |