题目内容

10.假设你是李明,自从升入高一以来,老师和家长都要你住校学习,而你却喜欢住在家里,双方各持己见.请用英语把这个情况告诉给中学生英语报某栏目组,请求主持人给予建议.
注意:1.词数:120字左右;         
2.信的开头已写好,不计入总字数;
3.参考词句:住校board(v.);方便做…It's convenient to…;
分歧disagreement
Dear Sir,
I'm a student of Senior 1.I am writing to ask you for some advice.
       .
Yours,
Li Ming.

分析 这是一篇开放式作文,写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.
亮点句型一:They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever.他们说无论何时何地问我问题都会很方便.it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever是一个宾语从句,从句中的it是形式宾语,to ask questions whenever and wherever是真正的宾语.
亮点句型二:If staying at home in the evening,I will have more time to work at my lessons.如果晚上呆在家里,我有更多的时间学习功课.if引导的条件状语从句是一个省略句,省略了主语I,和谓语动词中的be动词are.

解答 Dear Sir,
    I'm a student of Senior 1.I am writing to ask you for some advice.
Since entering Senior 1,my parents and teachers have kept asking me to board in the school.They say it will be very convenient for me to ask questions whenever and wherever.(亮点句型一)Besides,they think boarding will make it possible to make full use of my night time,and that I also develop the ability to look after myself.
    However,I have my own thoughts.If staying at home in the evening,I will have more time to work at my lessons.(亮点句型二)At the same time,I can learn what I think I'm not good at.I really don't know how to deal with the disagreement between us.Can you give me your advice?

点评 考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示.给考生自由发挥的余地较大.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭.同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.

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