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11.请修改下面的短文.短文中共有10处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
=2  只允许修改10处,多着(从第11处起)不计分.
In China,people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years.But China's human population has been great growing.More population means more land is needed for farming.It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses.Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains.The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda's habitat into little islands of forest.Today,many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest,because of they will cross into areas which people live.The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.
Besides,to our relief,there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.

分析 本文讲述了在中国随着人类的发展和人口的增多,熊猫的栖息地越来越小,生存环境受到了影响,进而影响了熊猫的生殖和繁衍.让人感到欣慰的是人类已经意识到这一点,并开始采取措施,如建立保护区等来保护大熊猫.

解答 1.had改为have;考查句子的时态,通读全文讲的是大熊猫在中国的生存现状,要用现在完成进行时;所以had要改为have.
2,great改为greatly;考查副词,这里需要修饰的是动词grow,所以用副词greatly.
3,mean改为means;考查动词,这里句子的主语是it,结合上下文应该是一般现在时,所以用第三人称单数.
4,live前面加to;考查非谓语动词,这里不定式短语作宾语补足语,force sb to do是固定搭配,意为"迫使某人做某事".
5,damaged改为damaging;考查分词作定语,damaged指被破坏的,damaging指有破坏性的,在这里作定语修饰result,表示破坏性的结果.
6,panda改为pandas;考查名词复数,many意为许多,panda是可数名词,所以用pandas.
7,去掉of;考查介词的用法,because of后面跟名词或名词性短语表原因,because后面跟原因状语从句,所以要去掉of.
8,which 改为 where;考查定语从句中关系词的用法,在这个复合句中先行词是areas,表示地点,所以用where.
9,can 为 can't;考查句式,结合上下午分析句子意思应为"结果就是大熊猫不能与另外的配偶联系,不能繁殖",所以要用否定形式can,t.
10,Besides改为However;考查副词,结合上下文,前面讲的是坏的结果,下文又说"让人感到欣慰的是…",推测这里应是转折关系,所以用However表转折

点评 在这个短文改错中首先要通读全文,了解短文基本大意,再结合上下文语境分析句子之间的关系,运用所掌握的基础语言知识找出文中的错误所在.

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