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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I couldn't believe my eyes when I opened the front door．Everything were in a terrible mess：the books were lying on the floor but the drawers were open．Realizing that my house had been broken in，I telephoned the police at once．They had told me to keep calm and not to touch anything．Then I decided take a look around at what had been stolen．The TV was still there and so did the computers．Everything in my bedroom seemed to be complete untouched．I was confusing as nothing was missing．Suddenly，there was a knock at the door and my sister was standing there with his naughty boy．Oh，I could guess all which had happened．

分析 本文讲述了作者回家看到的一幕：眼前一团糟：书本撒在地上，抽屉也开着．当他意识到可能家里进了小偷后就立刻打电话报了警．警察告诉他不要破坏现场．但作者还是决定先看一下有什么东西被偷了．电视电脑都还在那里，卧室里的东西看起来也没动过．什么东西都没丢，这让作者感到疑惑．忽然有人敲门，当作者看到姐姐和她淘气的儿子站在那里时就一下子明白发生了什么事了！

解答 1．were改为was；考查主谓一致，不定代词作主语，谓语动词用单数．
2．but改为and；考查连词，but表示转折，and连接两个并列成分，这里"the books were lying on the floor"和"the drawers were open"是并列的，
 所以要用and．
3．in改为into；考查介词，break into是固定搭配，意为"破门而入"．
4．去掉had；考查时态，这里是一般过去时，直接用动词的过去形式．
5．decided 后面加to；考查不定式，决定做某事用decided to do．
6．did 改为were；考查考查并列结构中的前后一致，and 连接并列成分，and前面用的是be动词was，所以后面应该用were．这里是倒装结构．
7．complete改为completely；考查副词，修饰动词untouch要用副词．
8．confusing 改为confused；考查分词作形容词．现在分词作形容词通常修饰物，表示事物的性质，过去分词作形容词通常修饰人，表示人物的心理状态．这里修饰的是I，所以用confused．
9．his改为her；考查物主代词的用法，这里的物主代词应与前面的my sister保持一致．
10．which改为that；宾语从句中先行词是不定代词时，关系代词用that．

点评 改错题中要注意词意，词性，句型结构以及一些固定搭配的用法，结合上下文确定句子之间的关系，以便找出文中错误所在．

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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．?
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．?
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．?
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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4．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
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Dear manager，
I'm one of your customer．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop．Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got home，therefore，I found a fault with it．The problem is what the"Play"doesn't work at all．Probable it's not your fault and so is mine．Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
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=2  只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分．
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B．liked staying indoors
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D．dreamed on summer days
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D．preferred reading to playing outside
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A．he knows it won't last long
B．rain makes the weather cooler
C．his summer holiday is very short
D．he can better deal with his downtime．

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