Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter自从进入高中以来一直觉得压力很大，学习状态不太好。请你给他写封邮件，以帮助他振作起来。

内容要要点：

1. 给他三条建议；

2. 表达期望并送上祝福。

注意：1. 词数100词左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m sorry to hear about your situation. But I hope you will soon cheer up. Here are some suggestion for you to relieve stress.

First, try to build up your confidence. Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it. So never give up or lose heart no matter what happens. Second, you should find your own strengths and weaknesses in your study, and seek help from both teachers and classmates in the face of difficulties and stress. Last but not least, you ought to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax ourselves.

Look forward to hearing your good news soon. Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇是一个定题作文，作文的主题就是要给Peter一些建议，帮助她减轻压力。首先，本篇文章的整体时态应该是一般现在时；然后，可以根据Peter的压力问题给出建议，可分条来写出建议，用first，second，last but not least使文章条理清晰；同时要注意运用较高级的词汇，简单句和复合句的结合，丰富文章内容。

高分句式：

1.Preparing for the College Entrance Examination is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it. 准备大学入学考试是一个长期的过程，在这个过程中，自信起着重要的作用。本剧中用动名词做主语，使句子看起来简介，易理解。

2.Last but not least, you ought to do more physical exercise so as to keep fit as well as relax ourselves.最后，但同样重要的是，你应该为了保持健康和放松自己去加强身体锻炼。本句中，last but not least，ought to do sth.，so as to，as well as等语法的应用，是文章更显高级，有水平。