Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友(Stephen)来信说，要在圣诞节期间来沪旅游。他在网上选中了三个景点:外滩、豫园和东方明珠。他来信征求你的意见。请你根据自身经验，建议他舍弃其中的一个景点(要说明放弃理由)；并推荐一个新的景点供他参考(说明推荐理由)。

注意:作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级等真实信息。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Stephen,

I am very glad to hear that you are coming to Shanghai for Christmas.

Among the three scenic spots you have selected, I suggest you go to the Oriental Pearl Tower and the Bund. Known as the landmark building in Shanghai, the Oriental Pearl Tower is the place you must pay a visit to, where you can overlook the majority of Shanghai. And known as the symbol of Shanghai, the Bund stands 52 different styles of classical buildings, and I think you, who are interested in architecture are sure want to visit there. What’s more, you can appreciate the beautiful scenery of Huangpu River there. As far as I know, you are not interested in history, so I think that you needn’t go to Yu Garden, which is famous for historical culture, Instead, I think you should go to Shanghai Disneyland, where there are many fun rides, and I believe you will enjoy yourself there.

Yours truly,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信假如你是李华，你的美国朋友(Stephen)来信说，要在圣诞节期间来沪旅游。他在网上选中了三个景点:外滩、豫园和东方明珠，他来信征求你的意见，请你根据自身经验，建议他舍弃其中的一个景点(要说明放弃理由)；并推荐一个新的景点供他参考(说明推荐理由)。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； scenic spots（景点），Oriental Pearl Tower（东方明珠电视塔），the Bund（外滩），landmark（地标）， symbol（象征），Yu Garden（豫园）， scenery（风景）及overlook（俯瞰）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。