题目内容
【题目】以下是你所在的广州第一中学一位外籍教师Eric Nilsson的简历:
姓名 | Eric Nilsson |
职业 | 英语教师 |
工作单位 | 广州第一中学 |
经历 | 1988年从美国某大学毕业,1992年与妻子来中国工作,在广州第一中学从事英语教学五年多 |
主要事迹 | 1. 热爱教学,乐于帮助大家,治学严谨,深受学生喜爱和尊重; 2. 课堂生动有趣,受到同学们的欢迎; 3. 经常给学生做各种讲座(例如:如何培养好的学习习惯等)。 |
写作内容:假设你所在中学的校报拟定在下期介绍各位外籍教师,请就Eric Nilsson的简历为他写一篇介绍性的英语短文。
写作要求:只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
评分标准:句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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【答案】After graduating from an American university in 1988, Eric Nilsson came to China with his wife in 1992. Having worked in Guangzhou No.1 Middle School as an English teacher for over five years, Eric Nilsson is liked and respected by all his students. He loves teaching and is always ready to help his students when they have trouble. Though he is strict, his class is always lively and interesting, so he is very popular with his students. Besides teaching, he also gives lectures on how to form good learning habits and so on.
【解析】试题分析:本文是一篇介绍外籍教师的英语短文。根据所给提纲,列出要点,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇介绍人的文章,其语言精练,内容齐全,句子衔接紧密,文中使用高级句子。After graduating from an American university in 1988,运用动名词;现在分词完成式做原因状语;He loves teaching and is always ready to help his students when they have trouble.when引导时间状语从句;Though he is strict, his class is always lively and interesting, Though引导让步状语从句;so he is very popular with his students.并列句恰到好处;Besides teaching, Besides的这种用法为文章锦上添花。