题目内容
广州亚组委正在为宣传册征集稿件。请你根据以下信息,用英语写一篇介绍主办城市广州市的文章参与投稿。
概况:中国第三大城市;广东省省会,政治,经济,科学,教育,文化中心;
全市面积7434.4平方公里; 人口1100多万。
别称:花城。
地理:广东省中部.珠江三角洲北缘,珠江从市中心穿过,气候温暖湿润。
历史:2,200多年历史的名城, 历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。
旅游:风光旖旎,旅游资源丰富。
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 珠江三角洲 the Pearl River Delta
海上丝绸之路 the Maritime Silk Road
始发港 a starting port
Guangzhou, the third largest city in China,
Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and the centre of its political, economic, scientific, educational, and cultural life. Covering an area of 7434.4 square kilometres, it is home to more than 11 million people. Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangzhou enjoys a warm and wet climate. Besides, it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.
I’m convinced that if you come here, a stroll around Guangzhou is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息来介绍广州的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。本文写作时可以按照概况、地理、历史旅游等进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。文章使用了大量的非谓语短语做状语。比如Covering an area of 7434.4 square kilometres,Located in the middle of Guangdong。还使用了with的复合结构With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.。副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。
考点:考查提纲作文