题目内容
5.假定你是某中学学生李华,你校学生进行了"读一本好书"的活动,以鼓励每个学生都参与到阅读当中.现在请按以下要求完成一篇写作:1.谈谈你对阅读的看法;
2.分享一本你最喜欢的著作并简要说明理由.
注意:1.词数100左右,开头已写好,不计入词数;
2.文中不得透漏个人姓名和班级.
We were assigned to get involved in the activity to read a good book in our summer holiday,which I think was greatly meaningful.Language is for utilization in reality.Reading is one significant section as well as listening and writing.We read books to comprehend insights of the elite and get enlightened.(高分句型一)We read books to get more acquainted of current situation and keep pace with our world.We read books to extract some experience from predecessors and apply to practice.(高分句型二)
Personally I regard reading as an indispensable part in my life,for example,The Great Gatsby is my favorite.It reveals the real situation at that time that excessive passion for wealth and great illusion were overflowing everywhere.(高分句型三)It has a great impact on me and inspires me of interest and happiness in reading..
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息 假定你是某中学学生李华,你校学生进行了"读一本好书"的活动,以鼓励每个学生都参与到阅读当中.现在请按以下要求完成一篇写作,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:谈谈你对阅读的看法;分享一本你最喜欢的著作并简要说明理由.
2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:get involved in涉及,参与;in reality在现实中;as well as也,和;keep pace with与…同步;Personally 就个人而言;have a great impact on对…有巨大的影响;
We read books to comprehend insights of the elite and get enlightened.(高分句型一)
We read books to extract some experience from predecessors and apply to practice.(高分句型二)
It reveals the real situation at that time that excessive passion for wealth and great illusion were overflowing everywhere.(高分句型三)
解答 We were assigned to get involved in the activity to read a good book in our summer holiday,which I think was greatly meaningful.
Language is for utilization in reality.Reading is one significant section as well as listening and writing.We read books to comprehend insights of the elite and get enlightened.(高分句型一)We read books to get more acquainted of current situation and keep pace with our world.We read books to extract some experience from predecessors and apply to practice.(高分句型二)
Personally I regard reading as an indispensable part in my life,for example,The Great Gatsby is my favorite.It reveals the real situation at that time that excessive passion for wealth and great illusion were overflowing everywhere.(高分句型三)It has a great impact on me and inspires me of interest and happiness in reading.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
对待机遇的态度 | 结果 | 你的观点 |
梦想着成功,却迟迟没有行动,等着天上掉馅饼 | 只能看着机遇从身边悄悄溜走 | (请举例说明) |
默默努力着,为机遇的到来做好充分准备 | 最终迎来成功的喜悦 |
1.可参照以上内容适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
Opportunities favour the prepared mind
There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future.One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future,but without any action,while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared.
The message conveyed above is crystal clear:Opportunities favour the prepared mind.The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities.Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities.Unsuccessful people,on the other hand,work little and just wait,seeing them pass by.
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities,let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example.In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics,she trained hard day after day and eventually made it.Therefore,we should make efforts to make our dreams come true.It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts.(152).