Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mary is a 16-year-old high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary had great fun, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】devoted改为devotes

【2】class改为classes

【3】deeply改为deep

【4】too改为so

【5】去掉the

【6】while改为when

【7】加上with

【8】We改为They

【9】relaxing改为relaxed

【10】but改为and

【解析】

【1】devoted改为devotes;考查主谓一致。who引导的非限制性定语从句的主语是Mary，因此应该用第三人称单数。故将devoted改为devotes。

【2】class改为classes;句意：她去了几堂课。class为可数名词。故将class改为classes。

【3】deeply改为deep;此处不是修饰动词而是修饰名词，所以不应该用副词deeply。deep in night深夜。故将deeply改为deep。

【4】too改为so;固定用法。so … that太..以至于；too…to太…以至于不能。故将too改为so。

【5】去掉Sunday前面的the;固定用法。on Sunday在周末；in the morning在早上；on Sunday morning在周末早上。故去掉Sunday前面的the。

【6】while改为when;固定句式。be about to do sth ….when当…的时候正要做。故将while改为when。

【7】come up后加上with; 固定搭配。come up with 想出。故在come up后加上with。

【8】We改为They;考查代词指代一致。整篇文章采用的是第二人称的角度。前面提到了she和her father。故将We改为They。

【9】relaxing改为relaxed;考查动词的形容词形式。relax的形容词有两个形式。一是relaxing令人放松的，主要用于形容事物；二是relaxed放松的，主要是修饰人。故将relaxing改为relaxed。

【10】but改为and;考查连词。energetic充满活力的，active活跃的，积极的。这两个词是同一类型的词，所以不存在转折关系。故将but改为and。