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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起），不计分．
Dear Arthur，
I've learned from the Internet that you want to make with a Chinese friend so that you can learn the Chinese language and culture or know more about China．I'm also the student of Senior Three and I think I can help you．I'm glad that you were so Interested in China and I'd like to your good friend．I'll do my best to tell you more about Chinese culture by writing or chat on the Internet as often as possibly．I hope you come to China in the near future．If so，I am going to teach you how to study Chinese and show you around some well-known places of interests，such as the Great Wall．Whether you have any questions，just let him know．I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本文是一封书信，中国的学生李华从因特网上得知外国学生Arthur想交一名中国朋友以便于帮助他更好地了解中国的语言和文化，李华主动写信给Arthur，表示愿意与他成为朋友，并且可以通过写信或网上聊天的方式帮他了解中国．李华还诚恳邀请Arthur到中国来．

解答 1．去掉with；交个朋友用make a friend．
2．or改为and；or表示选择其中之一，这里句意应当是学习中国语言和文化，更多了解中国；几个方面是并列都要做的，不是选择其一．
3．the改为a；考查冠词的用法，这里句意是"我是一名学生"，所用a．
4．were改为are；主句I'm glad that…用的是一般现在时，从句也要用一般现在时，故用are．
5．to后面加be；不定式to后面要跟动词原形．
6．chat改为chatting；这里考查的是句子的并列成分；and，or等连接并列成分时，并列的成分语法时态上都要保持一致，也就是前后一致原则；在这里chatting和前面的writing并列作by的宾语．
7．possibly改为possible；as+形容词+as possible，固定用法，意为"尽可能怎么样"．
8．interests改为interest；这是一个固定搭配，a place of interest，意为"风景名胜"．
9．Whether改为If；考查连词，If引导条件状语从句，表示"如果…"，whether意为"是否"．这句话的意思应该是"如果你有问题，就告诉我"，所以用If．
10．him改为me；考查代词的用法，根据句意这里的代词指的应该是作者本人，所以用me．

点评 在这篇短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误所在．

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

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