假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

I have never been to a cooking school．I learned cooking from my mother because she was really interesting in teaching me how to cook．The main reason for this was because my mother didn't know how to cook something when she got married．
My grandmother never allowed her stay in the kitchen．At the age of 25，my mother started cooking，it was very hard for her．Therefore，she had to take a few cooking class to prepare our meals．After having that experience，she has decided to teach me how to cook．
I remember I always help my mother when I was with her in the kitchen enjoy cooking．Nowadays，I am thank for that experience．

分析本文作者通过讲述母亲教自己做饭的原因以及通过回忆与母亲在厨房一起做饭的经历，表达了对自己能拥有这种经历的感激之情．文中讲到：作者能学会做饭，主要是因为他母亲非常乐意教他；由于他母亲结婚时不会做饭，作者的奶奶从不允许她待在厨房里；他母亲开始学做饭时，感到很困难，因此就去上了几节烹饪课；正是因为她自己有这样的经历，所以才决定教作者做饭；当作者想起与母亲在厨房一起做饭的场景时，心里充满了感激之情．

解答 I have never been to a cooking school．I learned cooking from my mother because she was really
interesting in teaching me how to cook．The main reason for this was because my mother didn't know
  interested                                                                                         that
how to cook something when she got married．
                    anything
My grandmother never allowed her∧stay in the kitchen．At the age of 25，my mother started cooking，
                                                  to
∧itwas very hard for her．Therefore，she had to take a few cooking class to prepare our meals． After
and或将it改为which                                                                      classes
having that experience，she has decided to teach me how to cook．
                                      去掉has
I remember I always help my mother when I was with her in the kitchen enjoy cooking．Nowadays，I
                               helped                                                               enjoying
am thank for that experience．
    thankful

1．将interesting改为interested    考查固定短语的用法     固定短语be interested in 意为：对…感兴趣；本句的意思是：因为她真的很有兴趣教我怎么做饭．
2．将because改为that    考查连词的用法    由于本句主语的中心词是reason，故其后的表语从句用that引导
3．将something改为anything   考查不定代词的用法     此处用于否定句中，故将something改为anything
4．在stay前加to   考查固定短语的用法    固定短语allow sb．to do sth"允许某人做某事"；本句意为：我祖母从不允许她待在厨房里．
5．在it前加and或将it改为which   考查连词或关系代词的用法"my mother started cooking我母亲开始做饭"与"it was very hard for her这对她来说是很困难的"是表示并列关系的两个句子；故在两句之间加and；另外，由于此处的it指代的是名词cooking，故可以将本句改为非限定性定语从句，即将it改为which代替先行词 cooking，在从句中作主语．
6．将class改为classes   考查名词的单复数    由于a few （一些）通常用来修饰名词的复数，故用classes；此处的意思是：上几节烹饪课
7．去掉has   考查时态   根据句意"有了这样的经历之后，她决定教我如何做饭"可知，动作decide应发生在过去即：在母亲经历了由不会做饭到学会做饭后；故用一般过去时
8．将help改为helped    考查时态   根据句中的时间状语：when I was…（一般过去时）"当我和母亲在厨房一起享受着做饭的快乐时"可知，help应是发生在过去的动作，故用一般过去时
9．将enjoy改为enjoying    考查现在分词的用法   此处在句中作伴随状语，动词enjoy与I构成主谓关系；故用现在分词enjoying
10．将thank改为thankful    考查固定短语的用法   be thankful for 意为：感谢…，对…感激；本句的意思是：我非常感谢那段经历．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．