题目内容
3.假定你是李华,你打算暑假去美国旅游度假.请你给美国笔友Anna用英语写一封电子邮件,具体内容如下:1.7月27日去美国,希望能接机并预定一个旅馆;
2.希望能去Anna所在的学校参观;
3.推荐一个距离Anna家近的旅游景点.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Anna,
I am writing to tell you an important decision about my summer holiday.I plan to go to America to spend my holiday this year.
I will get to America on 27th,July.Therefore,I sincerely hope you can come to meet me at the airport and book a hotel in advance if it is convenient.(高分句型一)I want to pay a visit to your school.Thus,I can know more about your classmates.Besides,please recommend a local place of interest which is not far away from your home.(高分句型二)
I can't wait to see you in person and talk about our interests face to face.(高分句型三)
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息你打算暑假去美国旅游度假.请你给美国笔友Anna用英语写一封电子邮件.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:7月27日去美国,希望能接机并预定一个旅馆;希望能去Anna所在的学校参观;推荐一个距离Anna家近的旅游景点. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:plan to 计划做某事;Therefore因此;in advance提前;Thus因此;Besides另外;a local place of interest 名胜古迹;face to face面对面;look forward to盼望
Therefore,I sincerely hope you can come to meet me at the airport and book a hotel in advance if it is convenient.(高分句型一)
Besides,please recommend a local place of interest which is not far away from your home.(高分句型二)
I can't wait to see you in person and talk about our interests face to face.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Anna,
I am writing to tell you an important decision about my summer holiday.I plan to go to America to spend my holiday this year.
I will get to America on 27th,July.Therefore,I sincerely hope you can come to meet me at the airport and book a hotel in advance if it is convenient.(高分句型一)I want to pay a visit to your school.Thus,I can know more about your classmates.Besides,please recommend a local place of interest which is not far away from your home.(高分句型二)I can't wait to see you in person and talk about our interests face to face.(高分句型三)
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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