Question

14．"中国好声音"成为近两年来最红的一挡节目，很多人非常喜欢，也有人反对．

支持意见	1．歌手能抓住机会实现自己的音乐梦想． 2．歌手的精神和自信激励着我们． 3．任何人都能通过努力一夜成名．
反对意见	1．商业化太浓． 2．有些歌手隐瞒自己的经历，未展示真实的一面． 3．评分存在不公平现象．
你的看法	至少两点…

注意：
1、根据所给内容适当发挥，不可逐句翻译．
2．词数150词左右；开头句已给出，不计入总词数．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．
The voice of China is very popular in recent two years，arousing a heated discussion．
                                      

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
At times，the judges tend to give high marks to those who are famous singers，which is unfair．
高分句型二：
From my point of view，it does more harm than good as many students may form a false idea that they can succeed without pains
句型一 ①who are famous singers 该句是一个由who引导的定语从句．who在从句中作主语，替代前面的先行词those  ②which is unfair该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中做主语．替代前面整个主句的内容．
句型二  that they can succeed without pains 该句是一个由that 引导的同位语从句．that只作引导词不作句子成分．用该同位语从句解释同位的名称idea．

解答 The voice of China becomes a great hit of this year，arousing a heated discussion．
   Many people like this program very much．There are several reasons accounting for this．Firstly，they hold the view that the singers can try to seize every opportunity to realize their dream for music．What's more，their spirit and confidence make us moved and encouraged．Last but not least，anyone can rise to fame overnight through hard work．（支持意见）
   However，some people think otherwise，arguing that it's a wonderful program．For one thing，there are too many advertisements and it seems to care too much about the profit．For another，some singers on the stage hide their real experiences，not showing their real life．At times，the judges tend to give high marks to those who are famous singers，which is unfair．（高分句型一）（反对意见）
   From my point of view，it does more harm than good as many students may form a false idea that they can succeed without pains．（高分句型二）As teenagers，we are supposed to take a right attitude towards reality shows．What matters most is to follow our own dreams and realize our potential．（个人意见）

点评 该书面表达为图表类，通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据．考生应细致观察图表内容，用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚．另外，平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇，以使得行文有更多的亮点．