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6.假设你校学生会定于4月10日组织一次高三学生的登山活动,请根据下面表格内容,以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知,欢迎同学们积极参加.
目的锻炼身体,放松心情
地点关山
内容与要求1.早上7:20在校门口乘公交车出发,下午7:00返回;
2.上午登山,中午在山顶野餐,下午分组自由活动;
3.拍照、记录,之后参加校摄影展或征文比赛.
温馨提示1.自带午餐和饮用水;
2.4月5日前到学生会报名.
注意:
1  词数100左右.
2  可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3  通知的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数.
参考词汇:关山Mount Guan; 报名sign up; 征文比赛essay contest
Notice
                                                                       
Student Union.

分析 本次作文要求学生会定于4月10日组织一次高三学生的登山活动,请根据表格内容,以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知,欢迎同学们积极参加.要点包括:目的:锻炼身体,放松心情;地点:关山;内容与要求:1.早上7:20在校门口乘公交车出发,下午7:00返回;2.上午登山,中午在山顶野餐,下午分组自由活动;3.拍照、记录,之后参加校摄影展或征文比赛.温馨提示:1.自带午餐和饮用水;2.4月5日前到学生会报名.故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求.
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯.其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力.例如:定语从句on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon.被动语态we'll be divided into groups.不定式的被动to be held.In order to,make notes,essay contest等词汇及Besides 等连接词.

解答 Notice
     In order to encourage Senior Three students to take exercise and relax themselves,we're going to organize a mountain-climbing activity on April 10.(高分句型)We're to gather at the school gate and start at 7:20 a.m.by bus and get back at 7 p.m.We'll climb Mount Guan in the morning,on the top of which we'll have a picnic at noon.(高分句型)In the afternoon we'll be divided into groups and have a free time.Remember to take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held later at our school.Besides,take lunch and drinking water with you.If you want to join in,please come to Student Union and sign up before April 5.(高分句型)                                                                                                                                         
                                                                                                                                                               Student Union

点评 书面表达一般分为三个过程:思维、组织、表达.先是思维,审题想清要用的人称、时态及文章结构,把要写的东西在脑中思考,要对所给材料进行组织,把这些思维作出整理,使其条理、系统化,但这还是较粗糙的,可能还有一些用词不当或语言错误;最后才是表达,把组织过的材料仔细推敲,确定无问题了再落笔成文.在撰写时要注意主谓一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.上述三个过程,最难的是第三个过程,需要我们有较好的语法知识,掌握一定数量的句型,习惯用语,熟练的写作技巧,这样才能写出通顺生动的文章来.总之,要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.平时要多分析范文,多读多背诵,学会恰当地引用和培养自己的语感.

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