Question

2．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童．根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）．

启事 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童．申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元． 有意者请来信告知： 1）你个人的基本情况； 2）你对申请项目的基本设想； 3）项目经费的使用计划． 联系方式：2011hope@icf．org                                   2011

Answer 1

分析 本文为应用文，又是图画类作文．根据对一则启事图片的理解写一封申请信，申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童．写作要点：说明写信目的；个人的基本情况；对申请项目的基本设想；项目经费的使用计划．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第一、三人称为主．重要短语：on behalf of （代表…．），apply for（申请…..），be aimed at （目的是），worry about．（担心），go about（着手做），spend money doing（做某事花费钱），be worth doing…．（值得做），inform sb to do…..（通知某人做某事），dole out （失业救济），obliged （必须的，感激的），oblivion （遗忘）．

解答 Dear World Child Foundation organizers：
 My name is Jerry Lu，a student currently studying at Ming Qi Middle School．I am writing，on behalf of my classmates，to apply for the 2000 yuan's worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged．【高分句型】（说明写信目的）
 Being raised in families that don't have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers．【高分句型】On this account，we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor．（个人的基本情况）The following is how we would go about using the money．
We would  spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area．It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us"doling out"the supplies so that we wouldn't end up embarrassing those who we want to help．【高分句型】The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions．【高分句型】（对申请项目的基本设想、项目经费的使用计划）
 At the end of the day，our efforts might only trigger a ripple in the lives of some young people，but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world？（观点）
We would be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience．
You can reach me at 2011hope@icf．org．
  Yours Sincerely，
 Li Ming

点评 应用文要注意一定的格式．图表作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当拓展并发挥想象．如果是记叙文类的素材，要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．