Question

3．假设你是李萍，你的笔友王强最近沉迷于电脑游戏不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心健康．请你给他写一封书信劝说他戒掉这一不良习惯，并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议．
注意：
1．词数100词左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本题考查观点、建议及劝告等的英语表达．根据题目要求，形式上来看是属于书信，体裁上属于议论文．文章首先应该明确自己对于沉迷电脑游戏的态度，其次要列举沉迷电脑游戏的危害，最后劝说王强改掉不良习惯，并给出自己的建议．需要指出的是，要注意"沉迷于"玩电脑游戏和一般的玩电脑游戏之间的区别，否则会使文章失去说服力．
【相关语法点提示】电脑游戏 computer games；沉迷于 be addicted to，be indulged in；滥用 abuse；有害 be harmful to，do harm to；有益 be beneficial，be beneficial for sb．to do sth．；在很多方面 in many ways；摆脱 get rid of，break away from，keep away from；过有意义的生活 live a meaningful life；锻炼 take exercise，do exercise
强身 build sb．up；参加活动 participate in activities；开阔视野 broaden one's hrizons
Although it's generally believed that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you abuse them，they will be harmful toyou in many ways．（高分句型一）
 To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things．（高分句型二）
Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful  to your mental health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Qiang，
        I felt very worried when I heard that you are addicted to computer games．Although it's generally believed that computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination，yet if you abuse them，they will be harmful toyou in many ways．（高分句型一）
       To begin with，they will waste too much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other beneficial things．（高分句型二）In addition，playing games for a long time will do harm to your health，especially to your eyes．Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful  to your mental health．（高分句型三）
      Therefore，I strongly hope that you can break away from them．The earlier，the better．In order to live a meaningful life，you can read more good books，take more exercise to build you up or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons．
        Looking forward to your good news．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Ping

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．