题目内容
18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I still remembered my first English class at senior high school.My teacher talked in English all through the class,that made it very difficult for me to follow him.It was such different from the lessons I had been taken in junior high school.
In my next English class,he walked up to me if I was reading the text aloud like the other student.After listen for a while,he gave me a big smile and said few encouraging words.His smile lit me up suddenly.Later,I became very actively and volunteered to answer his questions.Thanks to her smile,I became confident in my English classes.
分析 本文主要讲述作者在高中上英语课时听不懂用英语讲课,让作者缺乏自信.在上第二节课时,当作者大声读书时,英语老师给了作者一个大大的微笑并且说了几句鼓励的话,让作者在上英语课增强了自信.
解答 I still remembered my first English class at senior high school.My teacher talked in English all through the class,that made it very difficult for me to follow him.It was such different from the lessons I had been taken in junior high school.
In my next English class,he walked up to me if I was reading the text aloud like the other student.After listen for a while,he gave me a big smile and said∧few encouraging words.His smile lit me up suddenly.Later,I became very actively and volunteered to answer his questions.Thanks to her smile,I became confident in my English classes.
详解:
1.remembered改为remember 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是现在的情况,用一般现在时态.
2.that改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是前面整个句子,在从句中作主语,用关系代词which,that不可用于非限制性定语从句中.
3.such改为so 考查固定搭配.different是形容词,要用so修饰,such修饰名词.
4.去掉been 考查动词语态.I与take之间是主谓关系,用过去完成时的主动语态.
5.if改为when/while/as 考查连词.根据句意:当我大声读书时.用连词.
6.student改为students 考查名词复数.其余的学生不上一人,要用复数形式when/while/as.
7.listen改为listening 考查动名词.after是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
8.加a 考查词语用法.a few表示"少许,少数",few表示"几乎没"之意,此处应是:少许,少数.
9.actively改为active 考查形容词.become是连系动词,后接形容词作表语.
10.her改为his 考查代词.his指代前文提到的my teacher,从文中可知,是男性.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
What I(36)Cmost about visiting my boyfriend's parents is the loud tick of the clock in the dining room as we(37)Aate our meal.With so little conversation I was quick to(38)Dhis family as cold.When we got into the(39)Cto go home,his father suddenly appeared.(40)B,he began to wash his son's windscreen.I could feel he is a caring man through the glass.
I learned another lesson about love a few years later.My father often(41)Ame early in the morning."Buy Xerox.It's a good sharp price,"he might say when I answered the phone.No pleasant(42)Cor inquiry about my life,just financial instructions.This manner of his(43)Bme and we often quarreled.But one day,I thought about my father's success in business and realized that his concern for my financial security lay behind his(44)Cmorning calls.The next time he called and told me to buy a stock,I(45)Chim.
When my social style has conflicted with that of my friends,I've often felt(46)A.For example,I always return phone calls(47)Cand regularly contact with my friends.I expect the same from them.I had one friend who rarely called,answering my messages with short e-mails.I rushed to the(48)A:She wasn't a good friend!My anger(49)Cas the holidays approached.But then she came to a gathering I(50)Band handed me a beautiful dress I had fallen in love with when we did some window-shopping the previous month.I was(51)Cat her thoughtfulness,and regretful for how I'd considered her to be(52)D.Clearly I needed to change my expectations of friends.
Far too often,I ignored their(53)Bexpressions,eagerly expecting them to do things in my(54)D.Over the years,however,I've learned to(55)Dother persons'love signs.
36.A.admire | B.enjoy | C.remember | D.value |
37.A.silently | B.excitedly | C.nervously | D.instantly |
38.A.take | B.treat | C.Think | D.regard |
39.A.bus | B.train | C.car | D.plane |
40.A.Punctually | B.Carefully | C.Proudly | D.Coldly |
41.A.telephoned | B.visited | C.warned | D.interrupted |
42.A.explanation | B.meeting | C.greeting | D.apology |
43.A.interested | B.angered | C.encouraged | D.surprised |
44.A.long | B.polite | C.short | D.warm |
45.A.praised | B.remembered | C.thanked | D.blamed |
46.A.disappointed | B.content | C.curious | D.guilty |
47.A.in order | B.in turn | C.without delay | D.without difficulty |
48.A.Judgment | B.feeling | C.suggestion | D.belief |
49.A.disappeared | B.declined | C.grew | D.helped |
50.A.opened | B.hosted | C.refused | D.invited |
51.A.depressed | B.fascinated | C.shocked | D.upset |
52.A.unhappy | B.dishonest | C Uncooperative | D.uncaring |
53.A.common | B.unique | C.pleasant | D.familiar |
54.A.opinion | B.mind | C.life | D.way |
55.A.express | B.send | C.give | D.read |
in large part to fast food,half of America's adults and one-quarter of its children are (44)C,double the (45)Bof twenty years ago.In the past years,eating habits have(46)D as people pay more attention to their health.(47)A,many Americans continue to eat red meat(beef in particular)(48)C pork,and chicken and other foods.Visitors to the U.S are often amazed at the (49)Bof the steaks and other portions of food served in restaurants.Fresh fish and seafood are (50)Davailable on the coasts and near major rivers and lakes,and fresh farm (51)C are available to all parts of the country all the year round.Americans also consume a large(52)Bof chocolate,ice cream,and other forms of dessert.(53)C beer and red wine are popular in most areas,many Americans abstain(戒除) from alcohol.Various kinds of mineral water are rather popular.(54)A
styles and habits vary between people of different backgrounds,but Americans generally eat with the (55)Ain the hand with which they write.A knife is used(56)A cutting and spreading; otherwise,it is (57)Don the plate or table.Fast foods,such as chips,fried chicken,hamburgers,and pizza,(58)Bbe eaten with the fingers.
There is an obvious difference between people in what they may do at home or in a fast-food restaurant,and(59)D they act in a restaurant.Because both parents often work outside the home,some Americans are(60)D likely to sit down as a family to eat once the children are older and able to prepare their own food or serve themselves.
41.A.conclude | B.include | C.contain | D.hold |
42.A.boiled | B.shaped | C.prepared | D.baked |
43.A.Thanks | B.Forms | C.Figures | D.Numbers |
44.A.strong | B.tall | C.fat | D.thin |
45.A.length | B.rate | C.food | D.height |
46.A.followed | B.kept | C.practiced | D.changed |
47.A.However | B.Besides | C.Otherwise | D.While |
48.A.rather than | B.except for | C.as well as | D.other than |
49.A.colour | B.size | C.taste | D.price |
50.A.likely | B.specially | C.possibly | D.widely |
51.A.work | B.skills | C.products | D.transports |
52.A.part | B.amount | C.area | D.number |
53.A.If | B.When | C.Although | D.For |
54.A.Eating | B.Cooking | C.Serving | D.Living |
55.A.fork | B.fingers | C.food | D.plate |
56.A.for | B.as | C.with | D.in |
57.A.lied | B.lay | C.lain | D.laid |
58.A.turn to | B.tend to | C.lead to | D.belong to |
59.A.whatever | B.which | C.that | D.how |
60.A.much | B.more | C.well | D.less. |
A. | this | B. | that | C. | it | D. | one |
-The current advice is to smoking and work out.( )
A. | cut away | B. | cut out | C. | cut through | D. | cut up |