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【题目】假定你是李华。你之前在网上为你校交换生Jack预定了下周六晚上730的川剧演出, 现该演出被宣布取消,请给他写一封邮件,内容要点如下:

1. 告知演出取消;

2. 后续事项处理;

3. 其它活动建议。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】One Possible Version:

Dear Jack,

I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a piece of pitiful news. But the thing is such. Later the opera will give the money back and then I will return it to you. Although the chance to watch the Sichuan Opera Performance has been missed, you still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in. For example, I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods. And watching pandas is also a good idea.

Wish you an enjoyable experience in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,表达告知朋友预定的川剧演出被取消,并告知后续处理和活动建议。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为现在完成时、一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:

1.告知川剧演出被取消

2.告知后续处理

3.提出活动建议

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

be sorry to tell; look forward to; a pitiful news; give the money back; some other interesting and meaningful activities; the traditional Sichuan hotpot; watch pandas

第三步:连词成句

1. I’m sorry to tell you that the Sichuan Opera Performance at 7:30 p.m. next Saturday I booked for you has been cancelled.

2. I know you have looked forward to watching it for a long time and it’s really a pitiful news.

3. Later the opera will give the money back.

4. You still have some other interesting and meaningful activities to take part in.

5. I can bring you to taste the traditional Sichuan hotpot and other tasty foods.

6. And watching pandas is also a good idea.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/SecondAnd then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other handSome,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步:润色修改

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