题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(TheEnglishDramaFestival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信,要点如下:
1.介绍活动内容;
2.邀请他表演节目;
3.请他提出活动建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.
A variety of activities will be included in the festival, such as singing, crosstalk and so on. You are expected to put on a performance with us. Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice .
Looking forward to your coming.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封信,邀请外教参加英语戏剧节并向他介绍活动内容。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 介绍活动内容(introduction of the English Drama Festival)
2. 邀请参加并邀请他表演节目(invitation to the English Drama Festival)
3. 请他提出活动建议(asking for suggestions)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the English Drama Festival;hold;invite;participate;advice;look forward to;ask for
第三步:连词成句
1. The English Drama Festival of our school will be hold.
2. I am writing to invite you to participate in it
3. There are plenty of activities in the English Drama Festival.
4. We expect you can give a performance with us.
5. We hope you can give us some valuable suggestions.
6. Look forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改