题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,学校每年传统的“英语话剧比赛”因新冠疫情 (Coronavirus epidemic) 改为下周六在线举行,请你写邮件邀请外教Mike在线担任评委,内容包括:
1. 比赛的安排;
2. 比赛的意义;
3. 邀请及感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest, which will be held online because of Coronavirus epidemic.
As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday, which will last for three hours. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers. Furthermore, some short plays will also be included. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English. In addition, you are expected to act as the online judge. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请外教Mike在线担任评委。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表明写信目的
2.告知相关情况
1)比赛安排。(arrangements)
2)比赛的意义。(meaning)
3) 邀请及感谢。(invitation and appreciation)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
invite; join…in; as scheduled; including; not only…but also…; act as; grateful; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the traditional English drama contest
2. As scheduled, the contest will begin at 8 am in the Art Hall next Saturday
3. We have conducted several activities including some English dramas given by students and teachers.
4. I believe the contest will not only bring much fun to us, but also arouse our awareness in learning English.
5. you are expected to act as the online judge
6. We’ll be extremely grateful if you could manage to come.
7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改