Question

14．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信说要来你所在的城市旅行．请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．发出邀请；
2．介绍你所在的城市；
3．提议陪同期间的活动．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to learn that you are coming to my city for travel．Certainly as your friend．I will accompany you all the time while you are here and all my family are expecting to hold a grand party on your arrival．（高分句型一）
My city lies in the southeast of China，famous for mountains and oceans．Here you can have the best tea in the world and get to know the warmest people．As a cultural center with a long history，our city has many buildings．presenting traditional Chinese style as well as modem western style．（高分句型二）So，I suggest we visit some most famous old buildings and taste some unique local foods．Above all，a street full of local goods is a place we must go to and where you can buy some gifts for your family．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to meeting you earlier．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信说要来你所在的城市旅行．请用英语给他写一封电子邮件．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：发出邀请；介绍你所在的城市；提议陪同期间的活动．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：lie in位于；as well as也，和；Above all首先，最重要的是；Look forward to盼望；hold a  party举行晚会
I will accompany you all the time while you are here and all my family are expecting to hold a grand party on your arrival．（高分句型一）
As a cultural center with a long history，our city has many buildings．presenting traditional Chinese style as well as modem western style．（高分句型二）
Above all，a street full of local goods is a place we must go to and where you can buy some gifts for your family．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm very glad to learn that you are coming to my city for travel．Certainly as your friend．I will accompany you all the time while you are here and all my family are expecting to hold a grand party on your arrival．（高分句型一）
       My city lies in the southeast of China，famous for mountains and oceans．Here you can have the best tea in the world and get to know the warmest people．As a cultural center with a long history，our city has many buildings．presenting traditional Chinese style as well as modem western style．（高分句型二）So，I suggest we visit some most famous old buildings and taste some unique local foods．Above all，a street full of local goods is a place we must go to and where you can buy some gifts for your family．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to meeting you earlier．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．