Question

【题目】假如你是李平，今年暑假去打工，参加社会实践活动。请你根据下面的提示以 “An unforgettable experience”为题用英语写一篇短文，以发表在校刊上。

工作地点	一家肯德基KFC快餐店
工作时间	四个星期，每天8小时
工作情况	我每天要起早贪黑地工作。当保洁员cleaner，工作辛苦且令人感到厌烦，我差点中途放弃。幸运地是，我的一个工友很幽默。他经常讲笑话来逗我笑，帮助我克服困难，由于我工作突出，经理对我很满意
你的体会	尽管我很累，但它帮助我更好地认识了劳动labour的意义

注意；1. 使用第一人称

2. 不要逐句翻译，可适当扩展，要求字迹工整，卷面整洁；

3. 词数 100-120

An unforgettable experience

Answer 1

【答案】

During the summer holidays this year, I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.

Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. The job was hard and boring, which made me nearly give it up halfway. Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous. He often told some joke to amuse me, which helped me to overcome the difficulty. Because my work was outstanding, the manager was content with me. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

Although I was tired in the work, it helped me understand better what labour means. I think it is really an unforgettable experience.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语start off 开始；give up 放弃；overcome the difficulty克服困难；be content with对。。满意；The job was hard and boring, which made me nearly give it up halfway.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句；Although I was tired in the work, it helped me understand better what labour means这个句子中what引导宾语从句；