Question

【题目】Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信，帮助Brad用英语写一封回信, 给出分析并提出至少两点合理建议。

Dear Brad,

I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied. So I feel lonely sometimes. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1.可适当增加细节；2.不少于100词。

Dear Li Hua,

After reading your letter, I’m sorry to know that

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

After reading your letter, I’m sorry to know that you have some difficulty communicating with your parents. I have to say that you are not alone facing such a problem. It’s a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”. Here are a few suggestions for your reference:

First, it helps if you don’t hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, it is important to convince them you have tried your best. It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child. I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard. Besides, it should be a good idea to love them. There is no one who loves you more than your parents in the world. Whatever you are, they will always be there for you. So love them, and love can heal everything.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.

Yours sincerely,

Brad

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为任务型作文，要求负责人Brad根据李华的来信进行分析并写一封回信。写作要点包括对信中提到的情况进行分析，提出至少两点合理建议。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句that you have some difficulty communicating with your parents，that you are not alone facing such a problem，what we call “generation gap”.It做形式主语，定语从句whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”.who loves you more than your parents in the world.过去分词shared的用法。等词语。First, Second, Besides等连接词。