题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,请给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你将于2月2日到5日去他所在的城市伦敦旅游,询问当地饮食习惯及旅游景点,同时请他为你预定宾馆。信中还要说明你的要求:
1. 宾馆的位置及房间类型;2. 房费(是否提供早餐);3. 其他你关心的事项。
注意:词数100左右。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。开头结尾给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I am writing to tell you that I’m going to your city for a visit. Could you please tell me about the local diet and recommend some tourist attractions? Also, it would be considerate if you could book a hotel nearby the airport for me from February 2 to 5, in which case it is convenient for travel. I’d like a single room with a bathroom, and it’s better to offer hot water. In addition, the charge is not too high and breakfast should be included.
I would appreciate it if you could recommend a good travel agency to me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】
这是一封请求信。你作为李华计划2月2日到5日去笔友Peter所在的城市伦敦旅游,所以给Peter写信询问当地饮食习惯及旅游景点,同时请他为你预定宾馆。题干中给出了文章中应包含的三点信息,同学们写作时只要根据提示稍加发挥即可。
第一步:审题:确定时态和人称。这封信主要是要求你向你伦敦的笔友Peter写信,询问当地饮食习惯及旅游景点,同时请他为你预定宾馆。所以时态应以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
go to…for a visit(去……旅游);the local diet(当地饮食);recommend some tourist attractions(推荐一些旅游景点);book a hotel nearby the airport(在机场附近订个旅馆);be convenient for travel(方便旅游);a single room with a bathroom(带浴室的单间);recommend a good travel agency to…(向……推荐一个好的旅行社)等。
第三步:遣词造句:同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,同时要点表述要完整,文章要通顺,准确使用时态和语态。
第四步:连句成文:写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语,使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型,如定语从句等,以提高文章档次。