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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer I had a chance to visit Paris. That attracted me most was the Eiffel Tower, where has become a symbol of France. I was deeply impressed by their height. I have never seen such tall building before! It is made of iron and it is about 7000 tons heavy. There have 1711 steps from the bottom to the top. Climb the tower made me very tired, but I was very exciting. I took a lot of photo in Paris.
I have much memories and experiences to share. I will remember my trip to the France forever!

Answer 1

【答案】①That改为What ②where改为which ③their改为 its ④such ∧ a ⑤have 改为are ⑥Climb改为 Climbing ⑦exciting改为 excited ⑧photo改为 photos ⑨much改为 many ⑩删除the

【解析】本文属于记叙文，叙述了去年夏天我到巴黎旅行参观埃菲尔铁塔的故事。

①That改为What 考查主语从句。本句中what引导主语从句并在句中做主语。②where改为which 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是the Eiffel Tower,关系代词which指代先行词在句中做主语。

③their改为 its 考查代词。本句中it指代the Eiffel Tower，后面有名词height，所以使用所有格its的。

④such ∧ a 考查不定冠词。不定冠词a/an表示泛指，通常修饰可数名词。本句中building是可数名词，使用a修饰，泛指一栋高楼。

⑤have 改为are 考查固定句式。句式“There be......有.....”，而“have”也表示“有....”，这两个结构不能连用。

⑥Climb改为 Climbing 考查动名词。本句中动名词短语climbing the tower在句中作主语，动词短语不能做主语。

⑦exciting改为 excited 考查形容词。过去分词转换的形容词excited通常修饰人或与人有关的事物，exciting通常修饰事物。句意：登上埃菲尔铁塔让我很疲惫，但是我很兴奋。

⑧photo改为 photos 考查名词单复数。形容词短语a lot of许多，可以修饰可数名词复数形式，也可以修饰不可数名词。本句中photo是可数名词，所以要使用复数形式photos.

⑨much改为 many 考查形容词。形容词many通常修饰可数名词复数形式，much通常修饰不可数名词。本句中名词memories是可数名词复数形式，所以使用形容词many修饰。

⑩删除the 考查定冠词。France在专有名词，要单独使用，不需要定冠词。