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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. On October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched a flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang a national anthem, to music, feel extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought the old saying that "He who do not reach the Great Wall is not a true man." Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.

Answer 1

【答案】1.for--to

2.come--came

3.there--where

4.a--the

5.feel--feeling

6.attraction--attractions

7.proudly--proud

8.thought后加of

9.do--does

10.去掉but

【解析】本文介绍了作者去北京旅游，去各个风景名胜参观的情景。

考查固定用法。Pay a visit to参观，是固定用法，所以for—to。

考查时态。发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以come—came。

考查定语从句。where we watched a flag-raising ceremony. 是一个定语从句，关系词在从句中作地点状语，所以用关系副词where，there--where。

考查冠词。特指“国歌”，所以用定冠词，a—the。

考查非谓语动词。feel与其逻辑主语I之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词，feel—feeling。

考查固定用法。tourist attractions旅游景点，是固定用法，所以attraction—attractions。

考查形容词。感官动词feel之后，用形容词作表语，proudly—proud。

考查固定短语。我想起了这句老话，不到长城非好汉。think of想起，是固定短语，thought后加of.

考查主谓一致。who does not reach the Great Wall是一个定语从句，修饰先行词He，关于词在从句中作主语，关系词替代先行词，先行词是单数，所以do—does。

考查固定结构。Although 与but不能连用，所以去掉but。