Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Have you been asked for money by some beggars who have disabilities while you’re

enjoying shopping? Do you have any pity for that kind of people or just feel afraid? For whatever reasons the number of disabled beggars bumming(行乞) along the street has increased rapidly.

Why are there so many disabled people begging in the street? The reasons are so various that we don’t need to understand. But we know that they do not lead an easy life. So we should help them in some ways.

The treatment for disabled people should go like this: First，accept them. Don’t be afraid of looking at the terrible shape of disabled. Try to treat

them equally. Because they are a part of the society.we can’t abandon them. The second is to help them as much as we could. If you can be a volunteer and do some work for the disabled people that would be very nice. That does good not only to disabled people but also to yourself，because you will feel good after your kind action.

So give an air of warmth to disabled people，and the world would be much better.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120词就 “How to care for the disabled” 这一话题发表你的看法，内容包括：

(1) 对待残疾人的正确态度；

(2) 你认为应该如何帮助残疾人；

(3) 残疾人也应该享有平等的权利。

(4)【写作要求】

1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；

2. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The passage tells us that there are more and more beggars begging along the street. The main reason is that most of them lead a difficult life. So we should accept them and help them as much as possible.

I can’t agree more with the writer. Everyone is born equal, and the disabled are no exception .They are also part of our society and can also make contributions. So they should enjoy the same rights as we do. But as they have disabilities ,they may have come across different kinds of difficulties in their life, so we should try to help them.

As far as I am concerned, there are many ways to help the disabled, but the most important one is to help improve their living conditions. First, the government should provide the disabled with job opportunities so that they an earn a living .Besides, it’s a good idea for the government to give them necessary training for jobs. In this way they can earn money and support themselves, thus improving their life. Additionally, we should make public places accessible to them ,for example, wide doors for wheelchairs earphones in cinemas for the deaf, blind walking ways for the blind and so on.

All in all, only when we try every effort to improve the life of the disabled can they enjoy the same rights as we do.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于阅读任务型写作，根据所给的阅读材料可以看出是写有关怎样对待残疾人的问题。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读所给材料，弄清材料所提供的信息，告诉我们什么道理。2、所给的写作内容就是文章的总体框架，要在写作内容的范围内进行构思和合理地展开想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如begging along the street；thus improving their life都用了非谓语作后置定语和状语；I can’t agree more with the writer.这句是表示赞同对方观点的佳句；so that they an earn a living用了状语从句；only when we try every effort to improve the life of the disabled can they enjoy the same rights as we do.用了倒装句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语come across；As far as I am concerned；All in all等以及副词Additionally的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。