题目内容
12．假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
3．错误类型不涉及单词拼写．
Burying himself in a pile of books，a man is sitting in a coffee shop quiet．He is Liang Shi，50years old，from Sichuan province．He might be the most determined student because he has tried to crack Gaokao 20time．And he is ready to try it again in this year．Never giving his dream，Liang has decided to continue her attempt--to get into Sichuan University．Last year，he only got 417points，that was far from the passing marks for admission to a university．Liang first took part in Gaokao when he is 16．Now 30years later，he runs his own business and his son is already a college student．When asking why he keeps trying for Gaokao，he said"I just want to realize my dream of go to college．For me，it's the hope of life．"
分析 本文主要讲述一个名叫Liang Shi的50岁男子，来自于四川，参加了20次高考，今年高考分数是417分，远离大学录取分数线．他还要继续高考去实现他上大学的理想．
解答 Burying himself in a pile of books，a man is sitting in a coffee shop quiet．He is Liang Shi，50 years old，from Sichuan province．He might be the most determined student because he has tried to crack Gaokao 20 time．And he is ready to try it again in this year．Never giving∧his dream，Liang has decided to continue her attempt--to get into Sichuan University．Last year，he only got 417 points，that was far from the passing marks for admission to a university．Liang first took part in Gaokao when he is 16．Now 30 years later，he runs his own business and his son is already a college student．When asking why he keeps trying for Gaokao，he said"I just want to realize my dream of go to college．For me，it's the hope of life．"
详解：
1．quiet改为quietly 考查副词．sit是动词，要用副词修饰．
2．time改为times 考查名词复数．time意为"次"，是可数名词，其前有数词20修饰时用复数形式．
3．去掉in 考查介词．this year在句中作状语时前面不需要加介词in．
4．加up 考查词语用法．give up意为"放弃"，是固定搭配．
5．her改为his 考查代词．his指代文中提到的Liang Shi，是男性．
6．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词417 points在从句中作主语，用关系代词which，that不可用于非限制性定语从句中．
7．a改为the 考查冠词．admission to the university意为"大学录取"，是固定搭配．
8．is改为was 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
9．asking改为asked 考查过去分词．he与ask之间是动宾关系，用"when+过去分词"结构作状语．
10．go改为going 考查动名词．of是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
） 并在其下面写出该加的词．