Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As we know, it was not easy for J.K Rowling to create Harry Potter. The idea for Harry Potter come to her while she was on a delayed train between Manchester and London. She wrote down her ideas on the back of envelope. She then continued to add flesh for the bones of the first Harry Potter story. During her creation, she had the extra burden of look after her baby and had to write with hand for a lack of typewriter. It was only in 1997 she completed the first Harry Potter story. After the first book, the success of each of the following titles was automatically. The fifth book sold about seven million copies the day when it was published. What makes the books so important are that they create a special literary bond between parents and children. In addition, much to the pleasant of the schoolchildren, Harry Potter has even become part of the school curriculum.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】come→came

【2】envelope前加an

【3】for→to

【4】look→looking

【5】with→by

【6】1997后面加that

【7】automatic

【8】when去掉

【9】are→is

【10】pleasant→pleasure

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，讲述了杰克.罗琳创造哈利波特系列小说的有关内容。

【1】come→came 考查时态。本句的时间状语是while she was on a delayed train between Manchester and London.这是过去的时间，所以主语应该使用一般过去时。

【2】envelope前加an 考查冠词。名词envelope（信封），是可数名词，前面加不定冠词an表示泛指。句意：她在一个信封的反面写下自己的想法。

【3】for→to 考查固定搭配。动词短语add...to...“把……加到……之上”；接着她就在第一部哈利波特的故事的里添加了很多鲜活的内容

【4】look→looking 考查动名词。介词of的后面要接名词或动名词作宾语，故把look改为looking。

【5】with→by 考查介词短语。by hand表示“用手地，手动地”；该短语在句中作为方式状语。句意：由于没有打字机，她不得不手写书稿。

【6】1997后面加that 考查强调句型。本句强调时间状语in 1997；强调句型的基本结构为：It is/was+被强调成分+that/who+其他成分；如果被强调成分是人，就使用that/who，如果被强调成分不是人，就使用that。

【7】automatically→automatic 考查形容词。在英语中系动词后面通常接形容词构成系表结构，所以本句使用形容词automatic和was构成系表结构。

【8】when去掉 考查状语从句。在英语中，一些表示时间的名词短语转换成连词，引导时间状语从句。如the minute, the moment，the first time....。本句中the day引导时间状语从句。

【9】are→is 考查主谓一致。当what引导的主语从句放在句首，谓语动词用单数形式。让这套书如此重要的是他们在你父母亲和孩子之间创造了一个特殊的文学联系。

【10】pleasant→pleasure 考查固定短语。短语to one's pleasure表示“让某人高兴的是”；类似的结构还有to one's joy/surprise等等。