题目内容
【题目】You can’t stop things from happening, but you can control your reaction from making things worse and react positively.
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;
②除诗歌外,文体不限;
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
④词数为120左右。
【答案】
In our daily life, it is not uncommon that things , especially bad things, happen beyond our control. However, if we hold a positive attitude and react towards them, we will definitely stop our situation from getting worse, eventually ending up with a happier life.
At the mention of the topic, I cannot but think of what I experienced a couple of months ago. After another math test, looking at the terrible marks on my paper, I wanted to cry. One failure after another had left me disappointed and exhausted. I was on the point of giving up. But my math teacher seemed to have sensed my frustration. Having specially called me to her office, she encouraged me to stick with my studies whatever happened. Cheered up by her words, I spared no efforts to study my math and my grades improved in time.
My experience fully illustrates that while we can’t control what will happen to us, it is up to us to take a positive attitude to life. Hold our heads up and be optimistic, then however hard our situation is, we will get through it and enjoy our life.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇话题作文,主要根据提示和实际生活经历写一篇有关克服困难保持乐观心态的文章,写作文前要注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读题目,分析题目的要求,明确题目要写的是是什么内容。2、本文需要结合生活实例,若无此经历,可以适当运用自己的想象来写作。3、在写作时应注意符合题意,注意时态。4、同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性,适当运用高级词汇给文章增色。
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