Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Climbing is my most favourite sport. I am very fond of it, especially in later autumn. One day early in the morning, my friends and I put on my sports shoes and start off. After climbing for half an hour, we got to the top of the mountain. There we had good view miles around. To the north, a big river crossed the city, on which there were many ships sail busily. A lot of beautiful trees was there, too. The sun started to go down, for it was time for us to go back. In the way back, we were laughing and talking all the time. We had a good time on that day.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉most

【2】later→late

【3】my→our

【4】start→started

【5】加a

【6】sail→sailing

【7】was→were

【8】for→so

【9】In→On

【10】去掉on

【解析】

试题分析：爬山是我最喜欢的运动，特别是在晚秋，最适合爬山。有一天，我和我的朋友一起去爬上，我们登上顶峰，领略了那里的美丽风景，我们很享受那天的美好时光。

【1】去掉most 考查最高级。Favorite已经代表了最喜欢了，再用most是赘余，所以去掉most。

【2】later→late考查形容词。Late autumn晚秋，所以用late。

【3】my→our 考查代词。主语是my friends and I，后面要和前面的主语保持一致， 用our。

【4】start→started 考查时态。全文过去时，用过去时态，故用started。

【5】加a 考查固定搭配。Have a good view视野很好，固定搭配，加a 。

【6】sail→sailing考查时态。前面是there were 已经有谓语动词了，后面用非谓语形式，用sailing。

【7】was→were考查主谓一致。主语为A lot of beautiful trees 是复数名词，用were。

【8】for→so考查连词和对文章的理解。The sun started to go down与 it was time for us to go back是因果关系，前面是原因，后面是结果，用so。

【9】In→On 考查介词。On the way back在回去的路上，用On 。

【10】去掉on 考查介词。that day已经是一个时间状语了，不用再加介词，所以去掉on。