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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

Answer 1

【答案】1. parent 改为 parents

2. on 改为 in

3. 删去 very

4. looks 改为 looking

5. where 改为 that 或脚去 where

6. begun 改为 began

7. telling 改为 told

8. a 改为 the

9. saw 后加 his

10. terrible 改为 terribly

【解析】第一处：parent→parents. 考查名词单复数。根据下文可知，Tony是和父母一起逛街。故要使用复数形式。

第二处：on→in. 考查介词搭配。in表示“在……里面”。根据语境可以看出，玩具是在橱窗里放着的，故把on改为in。

第三处：very去掉 考查句法结构。该句子里有一个句法so…that...，表示“如此……以至于……”，so修饰much，very在这里是多余的，需要去掉。

第四处：looks→looking. 考查非谓语动词。这里的look的实际主语是he且两者之间的关系是主动，这里的looking表示的句子是伴随状语。故把looks改为looking。

第五处：where→that或去掉where. 考查连接词辨析。该句子是一个宾语从句，且不缺少任何成分，意思也完整，所以连接词应该使用that或者省略that。

第六处：begun→began 考查时态用法。begin的过去式是began，过去分词是begun。该句子的时态是过去式，所以使用began。

第七处：telling→told. 考查动词时态。这里telling与saw是由连词and连接且表示并列发生的两个动作，其动作的发出者是a woman且时态是发生在过去，故把telling改为told。

第八处：a→the. 考查冠词辨析。这里用the表示特指的那个商店。

第九处：saw后加his. 考查人称代词。名词前要有修饰语，根据是Tony的父母，所以前面要加his。

第十处：terrible→terribly.考查形容词与副词辨析。这里用副词terribly修饰形容词worried，故改为terribly。