题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
中秋节是中国的传统节日,你的美国笔友Mike请你在他们的校报上介绍一下中秋节的情况,请你根据下表写一篇短文。
【写作内容】
中秋节简介
时间 | 每年阴历八月十五日,是中国最重要的传统节日之一。 |
范围 | 中国及亚洲其它一些国家都会庆祝。 |
象征 | 人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征,在那天会互相表达祝福。 |
方式 | 在那一天,人们通常回家与家人团聚,共聚晚餐。人们还会吃月饼,那是一种圆圆的饼,里面有肉、果仁、鸡蛋等。 |
【写作要求】
1)词数100左右
2)不要逐字翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
【参考词汇】
the lunar calendar阴历
【答案】
One possible version:
The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year. Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to have a family reunion, enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Gang
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是介绍中秋节的情况。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容(1. 时间:2. 地点;3. 活动安排。)进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意通知格式。
【亮点说明】本文用时间,地点,事件的先后顺序使文章层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如定语从句The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside. 倒装句 Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. 等