Question

20．假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖．请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺．
1）祝贺他获奖；
2）肯定他付出的努力；
3）询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺．
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）开头和结尾已为你写好．
Dear Peter，
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations …
to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge．As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．（高分句型一）
"Everything comes to him who waits．"For these years，you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day．Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest．（高分句型二）Finally，you succeeded in winning the online competition!
So I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge．At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．（高分句型三）Please tell me when you have time．
Congratulations again．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖．请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：1）祝贺他获奖；2）肯定他付出的努力；3）询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：the first prize一等奖；keep on 一直做某事；Not only，but also不仅，而且；Finally最后；make progress 取得进步；succeed in doing成功做成某事；
As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．（高分句型一）
Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest．（高分句型二）
At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Petet
       I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge．As your friend，I just want you to know how glad I am at your success．（高分句型一）
"Everything comes to him who waits．"For these years，you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day．Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy，but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest．（高分句型二）Finally，you succeeded in winning the online competition!
       So I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge．At last，I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together．（高分句型三）Please tell me when you have time．
       Congratulations again．
    Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．