题目内容
【题目】目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。 请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。
内容要点如下：
主要原因：1．考试偏多，偏难；
2．不用功，懒惰；
3．取悦父母和老师。
个人看法：1．作弊不对，违反校规；
2．要诚实，努力学习；
3．写出自己的其他看法。
注意：
1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。词数100左右。
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
【答案】
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
As students, we often take examinations at school, but from time to time we have too many exams which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. Just for the reasons, when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In fact, it is wrong to cheat in examinationsbecause it breaks the rule of schools. Just imagine! If you were cheated by others , you would probably hate the behavior. As a saying goes, honesty is the best policy. So we students should be honest and try to get good grades by studying hard instead of cheating. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.
【解析】
试题解析：将材料中给出信息全部包含进去，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性，尽量避免单词拼写、冠词、名词单复数、大小写、标点符号错误、搭配错误，词语错误（介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词），时态、语态，主谓一致，非谓语动词等错误。多使用高级词汇、短语、句型表达。【亮点说明】写明全文要点，行文连贯，用词确切，表达清楚，语言无误。第一段：描述现象，第二段：针对已有的现象摆出自己的基本观点，并对此进行阐述，具体说明。语言表达上，“from time to time”、“As students”、“In fact”、“On the other hand”、“Just for the reasons”、“What’s more”等这样的语句间的连接成分的有效的使用，使全文结构紧凑，连贯；语法结构或词汇方面，“As a saying goes, honesty is the best policy.”谚语的使用体现了语言积累的功底。较复杂句式常用固定句型“It is known to us all that……”、“In fact, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rule of schools.”本文中It 的句型比较多，还有定语从句：“we have too many exams which are too difficult for us.”的使用或较高词汇，这要求写作者具备较强的语言运用能力，考查了写作者的语言积累功底。内容上，对观点进行阐述十分详尽，通过“On the other hand”、“What’s more”的表达，是自己的观点更有支撑力和说服力。
