题目内容
3.假如你叫李华,你们的外教老师Mr Jenkins邀请你和几名同学今晚去他的公寓参加他的生日派对.但你临时有事不能赴约.请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.祝他生日乐;
2.表示歉意;
3.说明原因;
注意:1.词数100左右:2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mr Jenkins,
Happy birthday to you!It is my honour to be invited to your birthday party tonight.But I am terribly sorry to say that I can't accept your invitation.Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow.(高分句型一)To broaden my horizon and gain some experience,I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday.(高分句型二)I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it.(高分句型三)You are not only my best teacher but also my best friend.It is sure that you will give me your understanding.
A bunch of flowers with my best wishes will reach you tonight.Happy birthday to you again.
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你叫李华,你们的外教老师Mr Jenkins邀请你和几名同学今晚去他的公寓参加他的生日派对.但你临时有事不能赴约.请给他写一封邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:祝他生日乐;表示歉意;说明原因;2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:broaden horizons拓展视野;apply to申请;make prepare full preparations for 为…做好充分准备;not only,but also 而且;
Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow.(高分句型一)
To broaden my horizon and gain some experience,I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday.(高分句型二)
I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mr Jenkins,
Happy birthday to you!It is my honour to be invited to your birthday party tonight.But I am terribly sorry to say that I can't accept your invitation.Just now I received a notice by a company which offered me a chance to have an interview tomorrow.(高分句型一)To broaden my horizon and gain some experience,I applied to the company for a temporary position in my winter holiday.(高分句型二)I cherish it the chance so much that I have to make prepare full preparations for it.(高分句型三)You are not only my best teacher but also my best friend.It is sure that you will give me your understanding.
A bunch of flowers with my best wishes will reach you tonight.Happy birthday to you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.