Question

【题目】 短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】so—because

【2】look—looking

【3】加the /my

【4】am—was

【5】去掉to

【6】danger—dangerous

【7】glass—glasses

【8】something—anything

【9】 for—as

【10】frightening—frightened

【解析】

【1】so—because；原句因果关系不成立，应该是，之所以不会游泳是因为很怕水。

【2】look—looking；从句动词与主句主语具有逻辑上的主谓关系，所以用动名词形式。

【3】加the /my；特指我对于水的恐惧、害怕。加定冠词。

【4】am—was ；本文叙述的是过去的事情，应用过去式。

【5】去掉to；see是及物动词，其后不接介词。

【6】danger—dangerous；形容词作后置定语。

【7】glass—glasses；glass是玻璃，glasses才是眼镜。

【8】something—anything；在否定句和疑问句中something要改为anything。

【9】 for—as；句意：更糟糕的是，当我还是小孩时，看见过邻居溺水。故用as。

【10】frightening—frightened；修饰人用frightended，害怕的。