Question

5．You are the editor of your school newspaper．You received a letter from Mary who has trouble making friends．Write a letter of advice to Mary，using the information in the table below．

Problems	Advice
Shy	•Smile at your classmates； •Start conversations with your classmates；
Not very confident	•Learn to be brave； •Try to communicate more with your classmates．

注意：
（1）词数100 左右 （开头和结尾已经为你写好，但不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
The more you try to get to know them，the more they will try to get to know you
你越是试图去了解他们，他们越是尝试去了解你．
高分句型二：
You will become more confident as you get to know them，and you will suddenly find that you have many friends．
你会为你了解他们变得更自信，你会突然发现你有很多朋友．

解答 Dear Mary，
 After reading your letter，I know that you worry about making friends．You are very shy，are not very confident and feel like you stick out from the group．
 In my opinion，you are shy，because you are not very confident．Learn to be brave and try to communicate more with your classmates．Smile at them first，and then try to start a conversation with them．You will find that your classmates are really nice people．The more you try to get to know them，the more they will try to get to know you（高分句型一）．You will soon be able to talk to them about anything．You will become more confident as you get to know them，and you will suddenly find that you have many friends（高分句型二）．
 Good luck in making friends．
 Best wishes．
Editor

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．