题目内容
10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分．
Nowadays many people cross streets without watch traffic lights．So traffic accidents often happen for those who didn't follow traffic rules．Why don't people follow traffic rules？They haven't realized an importance of traffic safety．Besides，some people are such busy that they don't want wait for the green light．How do we solve the problem？First of all，we should develop into the habit of following traffic rules．Secondly，who breaks traffic rules should be punished．Lastly，we should teach kids how to cross streets safe．If we do that，there will be fewer traffic accident and we will live a better life．
分析 本文主要讲述现在许多人穿过马路时不遵守交通规则，主要是因为人们没有意思到交通规则的重要性．作者建议：首先，我们应当养成遵守交通规则的习惯；其次，凡是违反交通规则的人都要受到惩罚．最后，我们应当教会小孩子安全地过马路．这样，交通事故就会减少，我们就会过更好的生活．
解答 Nowadays many people cross streets without watch traffic lights．So traffic accidents often happen for those who didn't follow traffic rules．Why don't people follow traffic rules？They haven't realized an importance of traffic safety．Besides，some people are such busy that they don't want∧wait for the green light．How do we solve the problem？First of all，we should develop into the habit of following traffic rules．Secondly，who breaks traffic rules should be punished．Lastly，we should teach kids how to cross streets safe．If we do that，there will be fewer traffic accident and we will live a better life．
详解：
1．w atch改为watching 考查动名词．without是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
2．for改为to 考查介词．"happen to sb．"意为"某人发生了某事"，是固定搭配．
3．didn't改为don't 考查动词时态．文章讲述的是有关交通的信息．由文章开头的nowadays可知，该句要用一般现在时态．故didn't改为don't．
4．an改为the 考查冠词．该处特指交通安全的重要性．故要用定冠词the．
5．such改为so 考查固定句式．"such…that…/so…that…"意为"如此…以至于…"．such修饰名词．so修饰形容词或副词．
6．加to 考查动词不定式．want to do sth．意为"想要做某事"，是固定句型．
7．去掉into 考查词语用法．develop是及物动词，后直接接宾语，不需要介词．
8．who改为whoever 考查连词．whoever相当于anyone who，引导主语从句．句意：凡是违反交通规则的人都要受到惩罚．
9．safe改为safely 考查副词．cross是动词，要用副词修饰．
10．accident改为accidents 考查名词单复数．few修饰可数名词复数．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
| Problems | Advice |
| Shy | •Smile at your classmates； •Start conversations with your classmates； |
| Not very confident | •Learn to be brave； •Try to communicate more with your classmates． |
（1）词数100 左右 （开头和结尾已经为你写好，但不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
