题目内容
14.下文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
分析 本文主要讲述作者的镇上街道狭窄,交通堵塞,时常发生交通事故.作者建议政府应当关闭市中心对所有的交通除了公共汽车和自行车外,在镇外修建一些大的停车场,以方便人们乘车进入市中心放松.
解答 There are too many cars in our town.As a result,there are lots of traffic jams,and the airwhat we breath is terrible.The town is old and the streets are narrow,so there is not room for bus lanes.This means that buses got stuck in the traffic jams,too.There are also∧large number of accidents with cyclists.Personal,there's a simple solution about these problems.The government should close the city center to all traffic except buses and bikes,but build larger car parks outside the town.However,motorists can take a bus into the city center and arrive at work relaxing and in a good mood.
详解:
1.what改为which或去掉what 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词air在从句中作动词breath的宾语,用关系代词which;关系代词作宾语时可省略,即去掉what.what不可引导宾语从句.
2.not改为no 考查词语用法.room是名词,要用形容词no修饰,not是副词.
3.got改为get 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
4.加a 考查冠词.a number of意为"许多的",是固定搭配,number of意为"…的数量",此处应是前者.
5.Personal改为Personally 考查副词.修饰句子要用副词.
6.about改为to 考查介词.solution to意为"解决…的方法",是固定搭配.
7.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是顺承关系而非转折关系,用连词and.
8.larger改为large 考查形容词.此处没有比较对象,用形容词原级.
9.However改为Therefore 考查副词.前后两个分句之间是因果关系,用副词therefore.
10.relaxing改为relaxed 考查过去分词.此处用过去分词作状语.relaxing意为"使人懒洋洋的",relaxed意为"放松的;轻松自在的",根据上下文语境,应是后者之意.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
Problems | Advice |
Shy | •Smile at your classmates; •Start conversations with your classmates; |
Not very confident | •Learn to be brave; •Try to communicate more with your classmates. |
(1)词数100 左右 (开头和结尾已经为你写好,但不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
There are only three parts necessary in a script:the Scene Heading,the Visual Exposition and the Dialogue.
The Scene Heading begins with either"EXT."or"INT.".EXT.shows that the scene takes place outdoors,while INT.is used when the scene takes place indoors,for example,inside a room.After that,the exact place of the scene is given,such as"HOTEL ROOM."The last thing that must be mentioned is whether it is NIGHT or DAY.
The Visual Exposition is a description of the action or movement that takes place on the screen,and should include ONLY what you would see if you were watching the screen.For the first time,and only the first time,a character appears in the script,the name is capitalized (大写),and should be followed by a short description that includes age and build,for example:
The Dialogue follows the Visual Exposition.Each character's name should be capitalized in the center of the page,followed by the words that are to be spoken on the next line.Do not include any description of feelings before the lines of dialogue.If you consider it necessary to show a character gives a line in a certain way,for example,"angrily,"this should be included in the Visual Exposition above the lines,such as,"Cynthia's face shows her anger."But remember,Visual Exposition should ONLY show action we can see.
25.In a script the Scene Heading tellsA the story takes place.
A.where and when
B.at what time of a day
C.what has happened when
D.on which day of the week
26.If a story takes place in a park on a Friday morning,which of the Scene Headings is right?D.
A.INT.FRIDAY-DAY.
B.EXT.FRIDAY-NIGHT.
C.INT.PARK-NIGHT.
D.EXT.PARK-DAY.
27.The Visual Exposition in a script only includes actions or movementsB.
A.that some main characters do
B.that can be seen on the screen
C.that the writer of the story describes
D.that happen in outdoor activities
28.Which of the following short scripts is right?C.
A.
EXT.JOHN'S HOUSE-DAY There are many people talking with each other.Amy,in red dress,stands under a tree.JOHN is walking to her. John Hi,long time no see.Oh,you are so beautiful today! |
INT.BEN'S ROOM-DAY Ben is sleeping.CAROL,12,thin,beautiful,rushes into the room because she knows they will be late. CAROL Ben,get up!You overslept again! |
INT.LIVING ROOM-DAY It is raining outside.Daniel and Brian are watching TV.There is a glass of water on the desk. BRIAN Look at him!He's dancing! |
EXT.KITCHEN-NIGHT Cathy is quarreling with her husband as she is cooking. CATHY (Angrily) Sure!I'm mad at what you did.When are you going to learn to think of someone beside yourself? |