Question

10．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
There are a lot of experience in our lives．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year．I'm interested in English．When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition，I devoted me to the preparation．I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything．Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher，that was looking at me，smiling．Finally，I do a good job．When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people successful．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者被挑选参加演讲比赛，作了精心的准备以获得大奖．但一登台则忘记了一切，突然看到自己的英语老师正看着自己微笑，才重获自信赢得了大奖．

解答 There are a lot of experience in our lives．The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year．I'm interested in English．When my English teacher told me that I had∧chosen to take part in the speech competition，I devoted me to the preparation．I was determined to win the first prize．I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything．Suddenly I caughta sight of my English teacher，that was looking at me，smiling．Finally，I do a good job．When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down．Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people successful．
详解：
1．experience改为experiences  考查名词复数．experience是可数名词，其前有a lot of修饰时用复数形式．
2． holding改为held 考查过去分词．competition与hold之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语held last year作后置定语．
3．加been 考查动词语态． I与choose之间是动宾关系，用过去完成时的被动语态．
4．me改为myself 考查固定搭配．devote oneself to意为"致力于； 投身于"，是固定搭配．
5．such改为so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
6．去掉a 考查固定搭配．catch sight of意为"一下子看到"，是固定搭配．
7．that改为who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词teacher在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
8．do改为did 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，用一般过去时．
9．in改为with 考查介词．be filled with意为"充满"，是固定搭配．
10．which改为that 考查强调句． 英语强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分（通常是主语、宾语或状语）+that/who（当强调主语且主语指人）+其他部分．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．