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7．某英语刊物正在进行有关旅游的征文活动，请根据以下提示，以Travelling为题目，用英语写一篇短文，以便向该刊投稿．
1．旅游好处；2．旅游常见问题；3．旅游的准备工作．
注意：1．内容必须包括以上所有要点；
          2．可适当增加内容，以使行文连贯；
          3．词数：100左右．
Travelling
Travelling is a good activity                                    

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息某英语刊物正在进行有关旅游的征文活动，请根据以下提示，以Travelling为题目，用英语写一篇短文，以便向该刊投稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：旅游好处；旅游常见问题；旅游的准备工作．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：benefit from…"从…中获益"；breathe the fresh air"呼吸新鲜空气"；get injured"受伤"；make good preparations"做好准备"；go on a trip"旅行"；take care of"照顾"；enjoy oneself"玩得高兴"
When you are free，you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature．（高分句型一）
Therefore，when going on a trip，you must prepare yourself carefully．（高分句型二）
You should have clear information about the weather，choose a good travelling companion and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents．（高分句型三）

解答 Travelling is a very good activity．When you are free，you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature．（高分句型一）You can breathe the fresh air，meet different people and make friends with them．Thus you will relax yourself．（旅游的好处）
       But travelling is not always pleasant．For example，the weather can be changeable．You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while travelling．You may have your money stolen or may be injured．（常见问题）
       Therefore，when going on a trip，you must prepare yourself carefully．（高分句型二）You should have clear information about the weather，choose a good travelling companion and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents．（高分句型三）If so，you will surely enjoy yourself．（准备工作）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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